Phil in SF reviewed The Oxygen Farmer by Colin Holmes
Bleah
2 stars
The prose is merely functional. There's a lot of "As you know, Bob..." Using the wrong words. Using the wrong math.
And at 27%, i still don't care about the central mystery: a radiation filled lunar vehicle buried under regolith in the center of a forbidden zone. Apparently a secret landing on the moon in the 1980s. But there's no reason for me as a reader to care. The MC gets an itch to find out the story, but that's the only hook. The MC being curious is not transitive to the reader. There's no stakes.